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{{InfoboxOutpost
|Banner= '''[[File:ZietalMarBanner.png|150px]]'''
|Chapter= '''[[Chapter One|One]]'''
|Region= Zietal Mar Archipelago
|Years Active= 800 - 803 BY
|Government= Governorship
|Leader= '''[[Khestor Thidirlun]]'''
|Status= Abandoned and overrun by Grol
}}
A small Outpost, established on a strange island many weeks' travel from '''[[Bormar]]'''. Financed by Lord Voman Stoutheart, the objective of the Outpost was to, first and foremost, seek any clues as to the whereabouts of the legendary [[Chapter One|'''[[All-Gem]]''']], which was supposedly hidden on the archipelago.
 
== Location ==
Zietal Mar was established within the rough middle of the forest area of the island, in the shadow of Greencrown Peak, the tallest mountain on the island.
 
== Appearance ==
In its earliest iteration, Zietal Mar was little more than a handful of tents with some camp firescampfires dotted around. As more '''[[Dwarves]]''' arrived, it quickly turned into a well-built and relatively organisedorganized settlement. Wood from the nearby forest and stone from the Greencrown Peak were the predominant building materials of the workshops and houses.
 
Later on, the Outpost would come to be surrounded by a large stone wall designed by a local smith, [[Tobias Aetos|'''Tobias Aetos''']]. An "Upper Holding" would later be established, with its houses dug straight into the side of Greencrown Peak.
 
== Government and Politics ==
=== Early Days ===
In the first few weeks of the Outpost's existence, where most living spaces were still tents, Zietal Mar lacked any government, leader figure, or law enforcement. Over time it was deemed that a leader should be elected, with Zietal Mar’s lone priest '''Sigmarr Thoruva''' initiating the proceedings. The election resulted in the declaration of '''Kadol Ubbul''', to the position of Overseer.
 
The Overseer would be supported by a Lower Chamber made up of a leader of the Outpost’s industrial matters, and religious pursuits, and a third position by the election’s runner-up to act as a check on the Overseer’s power.
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=== Kadol Ubbul's Overseership ===
Having taken leadership at the very beginning of the Outpost's founding, there was not much Kadol was able to concretely establish in law or deed. He aided the local smiths in setting up a Guild and began discussions with [[Khestor Thidirlun|'''Khestor ThirdulinThidirlun''']] to form an Outpost molir for protection and law enforcement. With the Outpost developing quickly, Kadol stepped down from his position, no longer believing that he was the right dwarf to lead.
 
==== The Lower Chamber under Overseer Ubbul ====
Industrial Matters - '''Lokro Surjah'''
 
Religious Pursuits - '''Sigmarr Thoruva'''
 
Runner-Up - [[Ogrona Frontik|'''Ogrona Frontik''']]
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=== Ogrona Frontik's Overseership ===
Overseer Frontik took the reins of outpost leadership straight after Kadol’s resignation, having put herself forward for the purpose in an Outpost meeting. From the beginning, it was agreed that this was only a temporary government in place only until an election could be organized.
 
While there was some debate over Ogrona’s intentions, a new election was indeed held several weeks later, with the only candidates being Ogrona Frontik and Khestor ThirdulinThidirlun. The election closed with Khestor securing a landslide majority.
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=== Khestor Thirdulin’sThidirlun’s Governorship ===
[[File:KhestorBanner.png|thumb|The Banner of Zietal Mar's Marshal of the molir which later became synonymous with Khestor as Governor.|alt=|310x310px]]
Khestor's reign was kicked off with a slew of changes as promised by his campaign of "Strength, Stability and Security." First, he abolished the Lower Chamber and changed the name of his position from Overseer to Governor.
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==== The Consuls under Governor Khestor ====
Consul of the Public Affairs Office - '''Ogrona Frontik''', later '''Gib Andosk'''
 
Consul of the Tributary Office - '''Ilzar Goldspit'''
 
Consul of the Molir - '''Gramsik Lerch'''
 
==== Notable Policies ====
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''Freedom of Information Act'' - Allowing citizens to gain access to any non-classified government document by requesting it from the Public Affairs Office.
 
''The Official Guilds Act'' - Incentivising guilds to work together and with the government through a number of means.
 
==== Controversies ====
Early into his Governorship, Khestor was approached by [[Grabhol Faulkrunn|'''Grabhol Faulkrunn''']], a local Jeweller, who offered an opportunity for Khestor to join him in running a criminal enterprise in the Outpost. Khestor believed that this would allow him to keep an eye on the Outpost's underworld while also allowing him to profit off of it. Eventually, this partnership fell through after the murder of the mad dwarf Yorbear Greenfoot by Grabhol and Khestor. Khestor ended the agreement, which led to Grabhol started a quasi-guild with likeminded Dwarves, which he named the Umbral Hand. Its membership included '''[[Grinamor Yelsik]]''' and '''[[Har Bohn]]'''.
 
The guild quickly became an anti-Khestor faction which was advocating for a new election and an overhall of Zietal Mar's political system. Commanded by Khestor, the Outpost's molir raided the Umbral Hand's headquarters but never found evidence of criminal activity or a planned insurrection. Grabhol was killed by Grol soon after, and the Umbral Hand disbanded with his death. Unfortunately for Khestor, Grabhol left several diaries behind which detailed the history of their agreement. He used his relationships in the Outpost to have the diaries decreed as nothing more than slanderous lies, which soon became the accepted belief. With that, Grabhol Faulkrunn and the Umbral Hand became little more than a memory, and Governor Khestor's political dominance of Zietal Mar was assured.
 
== Economy ==
The economy of Zietal Mar was quite varied. The nature of the outpostsoutpost's isolation left them with little connection to Bormar's extensive trade networks. As a result, the Outpost was entirely self-sufficient, and a great variety of goods could be found in its walls.
 
=== Local Currency ===
Due to its far-flung status and tenuous hold on the island, Bormar belnings were never issuesissued to the Outpost, and the Dwarves of Zietal Mar were allowed to create their own coinage. The first bank of Zietal Mar, built and run by '''Moddoh Surjah''', utilisedutilized a simple currency of stamped gold nuggets, laconically labelledlabeled 'Banker Coins'.
 
Despite its simplicity, the coinage quickly gained a small hold, with traders and shopkeepers using it as their go-to currency. Unfortunately, with not too many services available and a glut of gold ore within the mines, the currency had few uses. Plans to re-make the currency were made, with some agreements about the new names of the coins. Sadly the new currency never got past the planning stages.
 
== Religion ==
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== Notable Locations ==
=== Fort Thidir ===
Fort Thidir was the stronghold of Zietal Mar, located in the area known as the "Upper Holding". The fort was designed to act as a final line of defencedefense for the Outpost and is a central hub of its government. Its initial construction was commissioned by '''Marshal Khestor''' and designed by '''Sigmarr Thoruva''', who was designated its Chief Architect. Despite never being completed, Fort Thidir saw repeated use by the Outpost in the dangers that it faced, including the final assault of the Grol and the last- stand of Zietal Mar.
[[File:Fort Thidir.png|thumb|Fort Thidir and the Zietal Mar molir.|alt=|310x310px]]
Fort Thidir had the following features:
* "The Tube", a one-hundred -meter spirallingspiraling staircase.
* The Government Wing, a corridor for the offices of the Zietal Mar Government.
* The Bunker, complete with security systems and escape routing.
* The 'Anvil Gate' Portcullis - a finalefinal door able to be formed out of fallen anvils.
* The 'Airlock' doors to verify the identity of those wishing to enter, and to trap those unwelcome.
* External Lava pools to push attackers into.
* Pathway flooding to slow the progression of attackers.
 
=== ''The Cuckoo'' ===
[[File:TheCuckoo.png|thumb|The fully operational ''Cuckoo''.|alt=|310x310px]]
=== ''The Cuckoo'' ===
''The Cuckoo'' was a top-of-the-line ship built in Bormar and initially commanded by Captain Ivar. The vessel was initially sent to deliver resources to Zietal Mar but was rocked by bad weather and storms. Supplies were lost, sickness had spread and three Dwarves were put down due to a minor mutiny.
 
As they arrived toat the archipelago, the ship was ambushed by '''[[Grol]]''' mercenaries. The ship was left in ruins as it finally entered the bay between the Red Hills and the Green Forest, close to the Zietal Mar. Farmir was the sole survivor of the massacre and ended up holing himself intoin a small house in Zietal Mar.
 
Once the ship was liberated offrom the Grol occupation by Marshal Khestor and the Zietal Mar, it underwent multiple repair efforts until eventually having been speedily restored to an operationoperational state. [[File:TheLovingGodStatue.png|thumb|The statue of the Loving God towering over the forest surrounding Zietal Mar|alt=|310x310px]]This was done out of the rightful fear that the Dwarves may need to flee the Outpost due to the wrath of '''Lord Voman Stoutheart'''. ''The Cuckoo'' played a vital role in the '''[[The Fate Of Zietal Mar|last days]]''' of Zietal Mar.
 
Once the ship was liberated of Grol occupation by Marshal Khestor and the Zietal Mar, it underwent multiple repair efforts until eventually having been speedily restored to an operation state. This was done out of the rightful fear that the Dwarves may need to flee the Outpost due to the wrath of '''Lord Voman Stoutheart'''. ''The Cuckoo'' played a vital role in the '''[[The Fate Of Zietal Mar|last days]]''' of Zietal Mar.
[[File:TheLovingGodStatue.png|thumb|The statue of the Loving God towering over the forest surrounding Zietal Mar|alt=|310x310px]]
=== The Statue of the Loving God ===
While Zietal Mar was no more or less religious than any other part of Bormar, there was one resident who was a keen followfollower of the Loving God., Sigmarr Thoruva. wasThis hislone name, and hispriest's greatest contribution to both his god and his Outpost was a truly massive statue that dominated the landscape. The priest also lived inside the statue, and did so until its departure. It is unknown if the great statue survived Zietal Mar's fall.
 
=== The Outpost Public Library ===
While not the most glorious building in Zietal Mar, the Outpost Public Library held the vast majority of the writings of its resident Dwarves. While not unexpected at an Outpost of this size, the one in Zietal Mar was particularly populated due to its well-written populace. The Outpost Public Library was managed by Ogrona Frontik, and its catalog contains tomes such as:
 
* [[Amoral Politics|'''''Amoral Politics''''']]
* [[Cursed King Loc|'''''Cursed King Loc''''']]
* [[Gib's Bulletin|'''''Gib's Bulletin''''']]
* '''[[Man & Society|''Man & Society'']]'''
* '''[[Mooshroom Invasion Study|''Mooshroom Invasion Study'']]'''
* [[My Time, In Brief|'''''My Time, In Brief''''']]
* '''''[[Rivend]]'''''
* [[Smiths of Arriqah|'''''Smiths of Arriqah''''']]
* [[The Finding of the Cure for the Black Quiver Disease|'''''The Finding of the Cure for the Black Quiver Disease''''']]
* [[The Great Storm|'''''The Great Storm''''']]
* [[The Life of a Governor|'''''The Life of a Governor''''']]
* '''[[The Magma Cave|''The Magma Cave'']]'''
* [[The Molir of Zietal Mar|'''''The Molir of Zietal Mar''''']]
* [[The Public Servant|'''''The Public Servant''''']]
* [[The Swamphopper Plague|'''''The Swamphopper Plague''''']]
 
== Timeline ==
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* The dangers of Forest Trolls are discovered, with the death of Urrin.
* The Outpost upgrades from tents to proper houses.
* '''[[The Public Servant]]''', the first Outpost publication, is written and distributed by '''Ortho Berukahs'''.
* Moddoh Surjah establishes the first Bank, with its coinage starting to be established.
* Ortho Berukahs is driven from Zietal Mar and flees back to Bormar.
* Kadol Ubbul is elected as the first Overseer.
* The Outpost is officially named: Zietal Mar, roughly translated in [[Old Dwarven|'''Old Dwarven''']] as the "New Mar Mountains".
* Zietal Mar's Molir is established with '''Khestor Thidirlun''' as its Marshal.
* A mighty storm rolls in, signallingsignaling bad weather for weeks.
* A plague of Swamphoppers [[The Swamphopper Plague|'''descends on the island''']].
* The Dwarves trek to the swamp, to put an end to the '''Bog- Kings''' and the plague of frogs.
* '''Lokro Surjah''', Grandin Thorsbane'''Grandin Thorsbane,''' and '''Bram Tuthil''' contract the '''[[Black Quiver Disease|Black Quiver disease]]'''.
* The disease spreads to a handful of other Dwarves, and an effort begins for the purpose of [[The Finding of the Cure for the Black Quiver Disease|'''finding a cure''']].
* '''Librarian Ogrona Frontik''' scours the island and unearths musty journals with clues to a cure.
* The Dwarves [[The Magma Cave|'''delve into a magma spout''']] to obtain an ingredient for the cure.
* The Black Quiver disease is eradicated within Zietal Mar.
* Khestor is voted in as Overseer.
* Fort Thidir begins construction.
* The Umbral Hand Guild begins to gain more power to itself.
* An '''[[Amanita Colossi]]''' is discovered and swiftly dispatched after an [[Mooshroom Invasion Study|'''attack''']] by mushroom-infected Jerl Bulls.
* Ogrona Frontik and Ilzar Goldspit marry.
* The various '''[[Zietal Mar's Lost Pages|ruined journals]]''' and tattered pages found around the island are finally pieced together.
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* Zietal Mar begins its fortifications.
* The chamber containing the All-Gem is found.
* The chamber is opened, after an encounter with the Grol and the All-Gem is recovered.
* A lengthy vote on what to do with the All-Gem begins.
* The Dwarves vote to destroy the All-Gem and flee the island on '''[[The Cuckoo]]'''.
* A fleet of ships is spotted approaching from the east.
* The Dwarves board The Cuckoo and abandon Zietal Mar.
* [[Alekan Indrothath|'''Alekan Indrothath''']] elects to stay behind, joining '''Kogan Gemesh'''.
* [[The Fate Of Zietal Mar|'''The Fate Of Zietal Mar''']].
 
== Notable Residents ==
A detailed [[Zietal Mar Census|'''census''']] was kept by the government of the Outpost, in order to keep track of alive, missing, or deceased Dwarves. However, the tales of several of Zietal Mar's Dwarves have a deeper history:
 
* [[Alekan Indrothath|'''Alekan Indrothath''']]
* [[Gib Andosk|'''Gib Andosk''']]
* [[Grabhol Faulkrunn|'''Grabhol Faulkrunn''']]
* [[Grinamor Yelsik|'''Grinamor Yelsik''']]
* [[Har Bohn|'''Har Bohn''']]
* [[Ilzar Goldspit|'''Ilzar Goldspit''']]
* [[Khestor Thidirlun|'''Khestor Thidirlun''']]
* [[Lauf Riziko|'''Lauf Riziko''']]
* [[Ogrona Frontik|'''Ogrona Frontik''']]
* [[Talen Andosk|'''Talen Andosk''']]
* [[Tobias Aetos|'''Tobias Aetos''']]
* [[Zeb Burnsthewick|'''Zeb Burnsthewick''']]
 
== Gallery ==